First attempt at a story,sorry if it is too graphic....looking for opinions to make my writing better.

Jhon: "Hey arn't you going to pick up your climbing shit of the ground, I'm tired of tripping on it?!"

Amanda: "Well I don't see you picking up half of your shit that's on the floor why should I!!"

Jhon: "I am so tired of this!!! Everything has got to stop!"

Amanda:"Oh and what exactly is 'everything'?"

Jhon: "Don't play fucking innocent with me girl, you know what.

Amanda: "Name three things, that I’m 'doing' to you."

Jhon: "Well for one you leave all your shit laying around, and and two you...wear all that skimpy shit all the time and then 'accidentally' bump into me, and thirdly you have walked in on me while i was.. well you know, not once but five times. It’s like your trying to fuck with me all the time, and I'm tired of it. There!!! I said it."

Amanda: "Pfft, your so fucking pathetic this is my fucking apartment it's my name on the lease, so I will leave my shit where ever the fuck i want to, i will wear what I want to, in fact how bout i just go naked?"

And with that she striped off her sweat drenched white athletic top leaving her ample bosom for him to go crazy for.

(which he did)

Amanda: "Oh and as for your MASTURBATION sessions, by the looks of it you should be thanking me every time you grab your TINY PENIS and stroke it till you splatter yourself with your own semen. The way I see it, I'm ALLOWING you to do it."

While still reeling from what he just herd and trying to hide his painful erection, it was all he could do to collect himself.

Jhon: "Well you know what that all holds up until you find out that I am paying for 75 percent of the rent, so the way I see it i get to make the rules."

Amanda: "Oh so that's where you got the balls to challenge me. Oh well nothing is gonna change, I didn't submit the subleasing contract you singed to the land lord. Technically you aren't even supposed to be here. So i get to make the rules!"

Jhon: "Wha...You....oh my go.....You Bitch!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! So, I don't live here legally."

Amanda: "Yep, and that makes you my bitch in this situation."

Jhon: "No I'm not because there is one thing you said that is interesting to me, who's name on the lease is it? Oh ya it's you`rs, so if I were to damage anything you would have to pay for it.

With that he drew is fist back and punched the wall as hard as he could and made a whole in it. He began to withdraw his fist from the wall to make another one. By the time he hand his hand out of the wall he felt her hot body press its self against him. The warm embrace allowed him to feel the body he had been lusting after for the past month, and made his erection even harder. The next second overwhelmed him with even more stimuli, while she put her foot in the back of his right knee, slid her left arm around his neck, and whispered into his ear "You break my stuff, I break yours." Her final movement involved sliding her right hand down his back, over his ass, and through his legs to find the target she was looking for. This was made easier by the tightening of the boxers he was wearing. The time it took her to wrap her fingers around his nuts and squeeze was the last pain free instance of consciousness that he had for the whole night.

This action had been something both had been longing for since they met. Her desire had always been conscious; she had done this to men renting with her before. She would tease them into sexual frustration then give them the opportunity to make a stupid move, and then she would pounce. One inappropriate grope, one physical advance was all she needed to have the justification to make them her meat puppets with their testicles. Then she would collect their month’s rent while keeping them quiet with the threat of rape charges and their fear of her hands which put their genetic future in jeopardy. He was different though, he did not make a move once on her in a month no matter how much he wanted to, and no matter how much she teased him. It was the action of punching the wall that finally gave her the opening she needed. For him, by her attacking him it finally gave him the right to defend himself and touch the gorgeous body that he had been lusting after. However, being caught up in the moment he failed to realize that this action meant the realization of his masochistic dreams. It took him a few seconds after she got her grip for him to start to do anything about it. With the pain increasing exponentially, he knew he needed to get her off. In this fight he had the size advantage; he was six feet tall and weighed 220 pounds. She was 5 foot 9 inches and weighed 135 pounds. Fighting was not a new experience for either of them, he had done tons of back yard wrestling with his brothers, and she had taken a self-defense class and had gotten proficient at getting to a guy’s balls no matter where she was. She also was a climber with hands so strong she could hold her weight up with three fingers. His instincts finally kicked in and he stood up and fell backwards. This stunned her and loosened her grip on his balls, but only enough for him to rip them out of her hand, stagger away on all fours and collapse form pain 3 feet away. It was two minutes before either was able to move. He was the first one to move because despite having his balls crushed he still had a massive hard on. This forced him up out of the face down position due to the pain caused by bending it. Feeling this pain also brought him back to the fact that she was still topless. He got up and sat on her chest and placed his knees down on her arms to pin them down. Feeling safe from her death grip and any other attacks on his testicles he began fondle her body. He ran his hands across her midsection and face feeling their softness. This brought her out of her daze, but she played dead just waiting for an opening. This opening came as he got the confidence to lean back and take of her super short climbing shorts. By leaning back she got the leverage to lift his knees up and make him do a back somersault. He ended up with his back on the ground and his legs spread apart, and without even opening his eyes he knew that he was in for a world of hurt. She did a leap frog move and slammed her balled fists so his balls were squished between her hands and the floor.
His body was in full instinctual shut down, he curled into a ball and did all he could do to endure the pain. She had seen this before and knew that not much was going to bring him out of it, but she took this opportunity to tie his legs up. It was also her turn to fondle. She ran her hand up and down his muscular back, cooing "Aw, did i hurt my little bitches balls? Does this mean that you give up, and that you will pay the whole rent?" With all his might he screamed, "Fuck you Bitch!!!", and took a swing at her. This drew her attention to his still erect penis, and she responded "Oh yay i've never had one last this long, and look your still hard. Guess I get to have more fun." She punctuated the word fun by latching on too his penis and lifting with all her might. He was set up right and pulled up about 4 inches, before the boxer material gave way. By this point he had recovered from the last blow to his nuts somewhat and the pull on his dick didn't have much effect seeing as the brunt of the force was absorbed by his boxers. With his last bit of strength he made a last ditch effort to establish dominance. The material giving way made her loose her balance and she landed on her but facing him as he got up to attack. With his legs bound he misjudged his ability and lunged forward landing face first into her sopping wet crotch.

Amanda:"Ha ha ha, looks the little bitch wants to please his master!"

Again Jhon replied "Fuck you bitch!"

However, he had little to back it up because all he could do was lay there as she tied his hands behind his back, and then tied a 20 ft rope around his balls.
Amanda: "Ok here is the deal, you agree that you are my bitch and place a chastity device on yourself or I torture your little balls."
Jhon: "Fuck you Bitch!"
Amanda: "Yay!"

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