Kicking balls got me in trouble at school

[Rosie]

Back when I was in school I was taking drama and was practicing the last play for our exams while some students and teachers watched it was about a war and there was a lot of stage fighting at one point me and a boy was fighting he went to punch me so i ducked and saw the opportunity to give him a solid uppercut to the balls he doubled over but didn’t fall most of the crowd laughed aswell as a few teachers I got told not to do it again because we had to take it seriously and told the boy to stand up straight and and overreact even when he said he got punched in the balls hard she just rolled her eyes we got told to act the scene out again while we was fighting I saw another perfect opportunity to kick his ball he arched back in slow mo like he’s in the matrix I kicked my leg out at his balls as hard as I could he fell to ground holding on his poor balls screaming in pain everyone watching burst into laughter probably because it was all girls after a minute or two of laughing our teacher told me to go to her office and wait for her 5 minuets later she comes in and says that the boy I kicked will be there soon he’s struggling to walk and she couldn’t be bothered to wait i was getting told I have a weeks detention for what I done when he finally strolled in I smiled and asked if he’s ok and apologised to him he was told not to make a meal of it next time as it can’t hurt that much to tell a teacher if I done that to him again and he said he would that was a bad move when we left the building I ask if he would really tell on me when he said he would I squeezed his balls and pushed him against a wall and said if he does he wouldn’t have balls anymore he told me he wouldn’t I kept hold of him for a minute or two longer and whispered you better not tell bitch let go and finished with a hard knee he fell to the floor like a ton of bricks curled up in a ball I could se the teacher coming out the building so I pretend like I was helping him when she saw what was happening she started shouting at me but I convinced her I saw him like that and was trying to help she asked him who done it but he couldn’t speak she told him to tell her who done it when he’s done acting like a child and walked of 

[Jared]

I wish I'd gone to school with more girls like Rosie!

[dvhour (Site Owner)]

you could be thankful she shared a story at all sir @Angry mushroom

i agree punctuation helps but thats a minor issue, the fact that you are sharing is a good thing thanks Rosie.

[Greed]

This story would be much better if it wasn't just one, long, run-on sentence. Please try some punctuation next time.